Benedict, I looked at your presentation and found it very informative. But why is the file named "Tanzania Presentation" when it's about Kenya? That aside, what do you mean by "furthering this study"? What type of elaboration are you suggesting? Finally, consider adding some notes to the slides so that it's easier to follow the logic and the key messages from the slides.
Joshua, thank you for the comments - I have updated the name of the file under discussions. I will incorporate the changes and upload better version. Thank you.